another poem
Loving You(edited)new title is -DANCING IN THE RAIN
Loving you,
is just first nature,
You make everything alright,
nothing could go wrong,
Even when I am feeling blue.
When I look at you,
the world disappears,
nothing can stand in our way.
Why do my problems disappear,
only when you are near,
there is just something about you.
I can hear the drip-drop-drip-drops from the rain,
and you are the only thing that matters,
no one can seperate us.
You make me believe,
you make me hope,
you let me understand,
and you trust me.
You let me be silly,
you let me be strange,
you let me be myself,
Lets go dancing in the rain.
posted by mariah @ 2:45 AM
2 Comments:
i actually liked that one. is it yours? if it is it was cool.
holly
on the big paragraph on like the third line i think,you put nee instead of need.
holly
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